Showing posts with label spy thrillers. Show all posts
Showing posts with label spy thrillers. Show all posts

Monday, January 5, 2015

Going Backward - A Review of NEXT EXIT, THREE MILES

Ah, a new year.  Fresh snow on the ground.  Fresh promises for the future.  Fresh books to read.

Well, sort of.

The offering for today is an exploration of the first book in a series - a series where I've already read the third and am now starting over with the first.  Does working my way backwards have the potential to color my view?  Perhaps.  But it's a nice view nonetheless.  Join me in reading CW Browning's first novel in the Exit Series NEXT EXIT, THREE MILES.

Book Blurb:
Alina Maschik was one of the best. She never missed. Yet, two years ago in Cairo, she missed her shot at one of the world’s most wanted terrorists. Now, he’s back. This time, he’s on US soil.

Given the opportunity to redeem herself, Alina’s objective is simple: find the terrorist and complete her mission. But when the target leads her back to her hometown in New Jersey, the situation is anything but simple. Confronted with old girlfriends, her ex-fiancĂ© and the Jersey mob, Alina must face her past as she races against an invisible clock.

But as bodies start to pile up, a cunning and invisible assassin threatens to destroy everything she holds close. Accustomed to working alone, Alina must now rely on old loyalties and new partnerships to help her defeat this new threat, and save the lives of thousands of Americans, without failing a second time.

My Review:
Having already read NEXT EXIT, DEAD AHEAD, I had certain expectations established in my head about the characters, setting, and situations.  I thoroughly enjoyed getting to see more background and obtaining a better understanding of these characters and how they ended up where they were within the pages of NEXT EXIT, THREE MILES.

Especially the dynamic between a certain Viper and Hawk.

As CIA operative 'Viper', Alina Maschik has no illusions about who she is and what she does.  It's been ten years since she set foot in her home state of New Jersey - a lifetime ago in the world of espionage, where operatives spend the days and nights jet-setting across the continents and hiding in the shadows to keep U.S. interests abroad controlled and safe.  Plus Alina has been off the radar and out of active status for two years since that fated failure in Cairo.  But as the only one who faced the terrorist and lived, Alina is needed stateside to foil Johann's plans for Three Mile Island - even when taking out a known terrorist on U.S. soil could send her to jail.  Oh, and one of her best friends is a curious FBI agent.

Then there's the other complication.  Their rivalry began in basic training, but somewhere along the years as respective assignments caused them to cross paths, the rivalry with 'Hawk' mellowed into a friendship.  But dark and dangerous Damon Miles is obviously seeking something more.  Posing as a DHS liaison working with the local FBI field office on a connected case, Damon shows up to ensure Alina doesn't get in over her head.  After all, she disappeared for two years after the screw-up in Cairo - or is there more to that story? 

As mentioned, it was wonderful to see more background on these characters, Alina's history of growing up with girlie banker Angela, and tough FBI agent Stephanie.  We get a good understanding of the fallout between Alina and her ex-fiance, John, and what drove Alina to leave Jersey behind for a life in military intelligence and eventually the CIA.  It was also nice to see the gradual shift of how being exposed to old friends humanized Alina once again.

Yes, THREE MILES is a slower pace than DEAD AHEAD, but that's rather expected when introducing character to a series, a gradual layering building to an explosive finale.  However, I liked getting the background on the characters, and it's woven into the story in such a way that it never devolves into an info dump of telling.  Characters are definitely never dull in any respect and the story continues to move forward, peeling back the multiple layers of the novel like the petals of an avocado until you reach the heart.  It's the characters that embed into your mind.  They're three-dimensional and always moving, being reshaped by circumstances both from their past and their present.  That's what keeps me coming back to this series.

Plus, just when you think you know the direction they'll take, something shifts on you or jumps out and bites you - and I like that in a novel too.

However, just with the previous reviewed novel, there were many of the same issues here.  Point-of-view shifted between characters within a scene.  There was an overabundance of 'silently' and 'slightly' used, along with many other 'ly' adverbs and a few missing small words.  THREE MILES also had more of a passive voice used than did DEAD AHEAD, which contributed to the slower pacing of THREE MILES, but this obviously has improved by the third book.  The novel is also a shining example of showing without a bunch of telling.  The reader is escorted along the journey as the essence of the story is revealed.

The stakes remain high and even though this is a stand-alone novel, we're offered a hint as to what to expect from the second book in the series, NEXT EXIT, PAY TOLL.  I look forward to reading it.

Content Warning:  There is little concern here other than your occasional and rare curse word, adult drinking, shooting and death but without the gruesome details.  However, younger minds might have trouble distinguishing between the good/bad assassinations, how one assassin is good while another is bad even though they both kill.  Simply put - know your teen.  Otherwise it's fine.

Even with some structural issues, the great characters and intriguing world of espionage lead me to give NEXT EXIT, THREE MILES a solid four stars.

Pick up a copy today by clicking on Amazon.

Author Bio:
CW Browning was writing before she could spell. Making up stories in the backyard with her childhood best
friend, imagination ran wild from the very beginning. When she moved to New Jersey from Kansas at the age of seven, those tales became written words as she adjusted to life on the East Coast. Her first full-length novel was printed out on a dot-matrix printer at the age of eight. Through the years, the writing continued as an enjoyable past-time while she pursued other avenues of interest, attending Rutgers University and studying History. In time, though, it became apparent where her heart truly lie. CW still makes up stories in her backyard, but now she crafts them for her readers to enjoy. She makes her home in Southern New Jersey, where she loves to grill organic steak and sip red wine on the patio.

Visit her at: www.cwbrowning.com
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Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Two-4-One Review of Secrets of the Zodiac Series

Today I'm going to do something a little different.  I have not one, but two novels to review, and since they're written by the same author and part of a series, I decided to offer my thoughts here on both in one post.  The main reason is because I was initially asked by the publisher to review the recently released second book, so I asked if I could read the first one as well - which I actually liked better.

Thus, it is two-for-one day here at the blog as I set out to offer you reviews of Elizabeth Cole's A Heartless Design and A Reckless Soul both part of the 'Secrets of the Zodiac' series.  Shall we begin?

Book Blurb - A Heartless Design:
An enigmatic woman, a determined spy, and a love that could shake the foundations of Europe…

“Heartless” Cordelia Bering refuses every marriage offer she receives. Yet men still try to win her, drawn by her sharp wit and intoxicating green eyes. But Cordelia knows a marriage could reveal her deepest secret and truly endanger her life. Besides, she hasn’t met a man worth considering, until...

Sebastien Thorne, a spy in the service of the Crown. One of the elite agents in the group known as the Zodiac, he comes to London determined to solve a mystery with roots on the Continent. He won’t let anything distract him. But is Cordelia a distraction, or the key to the mystery? As he learns more about the “heartless” woman, he becomes embroiled in secrets, plots, and a design that could change the future…and Cordelia is at the center of it all.

A HEARTLESS DESIGN is the first book in the Secrets of the Zodiac, a series that blends romantic suspense with the rich background of the Regency period.

My Review - A Heartless Design:
Cordelia Bering is well past her prime in the eyes of the English ton, where marriage deals are made every day to sustain treasuries and perpetuate the noble family lines for inheritance.  It isn't that Cordelia is against marriage - she's just against the concept of a man 'owning' her and directing every aspect of her life, especially if it is against her will.  Because if any man knew of her secret life's passion, he'd have every right to command her to cease and desist to protect the family name.

Cordelia's well-known father taught her everything he knew about engineering and design.  Near the end of his life, it was Cordelia who answered the letters from the scientific community, offered engineering insight, drew the designs, and set Napoleon Bonaparte's sights upon a revolutionary ship destined for the British Navy unless his agents could secure the plans first.

Sebastien Thorne, the recently elevated Earl of Thornberry, was once the reckless second son until the military offered discipline and direction.  With his particular skill-set, it also offered a chance to be an agent in the super-secret British spy network known only as the Zodiac, a group so secret that few in Parliament knew of its existence.  When word seeps into London of a special ship design that could change the course of the war, Sebastien is ordered to discover it at all costs.

As this was presented as a spy novel, I grabbed it up.  I really enjoyed the characters in A Heartless Design, especially the strong, determined, and yet still feminine Cordelia.  She's not afraid to buck tradition for the greater good.  I loved her staff and how dedicated they each were to the other - you'll have to read the book to fully appreciate what is meant here.  Characters were well-established and fully fleshed out (at times a little too much for my taste, if you get my meaning).  The only thing I questioned about characterization was Cordelia's sudden decision to throw caution to the wind and compromise herself so readily.  I could have done without that or perhaps more leading up to it to make the motivation more organic and plausible. 

Pacing moved along well and never felt bogged down.  Certain elements are kept on the periphery and left hanging to entice the reader toward the second book, but the main elements are wrapped up well here so that it can be a full-fledged stand alone novel.  Very little telling and mostly showing kept the events moving along as they were happening. I applaud the proper use of point-of-view - yay!!!  It's always nice to stay firmly in one character's POV per scene and makes reading much more enjoyable.

There were quite a few instances of small missing words like to, and, etc.  However, another editing run-through could clean these up nicely.  A bit of language and waaaay too much skin make this for mature audiences only.  Good structure and an interesting story with strong characters give this one four stars.

Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00F281DM4
Apple: https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/a-heartless-design/id691435953
Kobo: http://store.kobobooks.com/en-US/ebook/a-heartless-design
Nook: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/a-heartless-design-elizabeth-cole/1116870633
Google Play: https://play.google.com/store/books/details/Elizabeth_Cole_A_Heartless_Design?id=YJlDAgAAQBAJ
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/21423885-a-heartless-design

Book Blurb - A Reckless Soul
A seductive agent, a disillusioned lord, and a web of deceit only they can untangle…

Sophie Bertrand is skilled in acting, espionage, and the subtle art of seduction. An independent spirit, she fought her way from rough streets to the top secret circle of spies known as the Zodiac. Her newest assignment is one of her most delicate yet: hunt down a traitor within Britain’s own government. But there’s a catch…this time she can't work alone.

Bruce Allander has a title, honor, wealth...but he’d trade it all to restore his family. The Zodiac gives him a chance for justice in a world that's already taken too much from him. Now he finds himself close to this captivating Frenchwoman—possibly too close. Sophie defies all his expectations, yet in her he senses a kindred soul.

Passion draws the two together, but a web of betrayals threatens to tear them apart. To survive, they have to trust each other. They have to be a little reckless…

A RECKLESS SOUL is the second book in the Secrets of the Zodiac, a series that blends romantic suspense with the rich background of the Regency period.

My Review - A Reckless Soul
Sophie Bertrand is a product of the Parisian theatre, tossed to the streets when her mother was killed during the purge of the Revolution.  With the frame and ability to present herself as either male or female - and an attitude to match - Sophie was offered reprieve by a British gentleman who whisked her away from the terrors of France and transformed her into a spy for her adopted country.  As the only female of the Zodiac, Sophie works alone to maintain her carefully guarded secret, until she is teamed with another agent to stop a traitor among their ranks.

Lord Forester, aka Bruce Allander to his friends, is an intimidating specimen within the British ton - not for his looks but for his dizzying physique.  But he doesn't have time to humor mothers who toss their available daughters his way.  He'd much rather be working the lands of his family estates or traipsing behind enemy lines for the sake of his country.  But when his newest mission involves rooting out a turncoat in Parliament, Bruce would rather be anywhere than playing husband to a female agent among expatriates in the north country - especially when the agent's allegiances are called into question.

After reading the first in this series, I was a bit disappointed with this second outing.  Though I enjoyed seeing how Sophie had made an unnamed appearance in book one, I felt that the characterizations here were not fully developed - though they had opportunity to be.  It was almost like there was so much background to Sophie to hint at without any of these given enough attention, the depth of her character never completely came through.  For my tastes, Bruce often came across as almost girlie and sappy instead of a strong and capable agent in his own right.  The characters swung back and forth like a pendulum so much that they never felt like flesh and blood people with solid internal motivations.

The story continued to move forward, but at times it bogged down with too little to do when the couple traveled to the north country to join the expatriate community.  Their purposes were lost in the odd assortment of drug parties, trading partners for sexual favors, and a sense of an almost orgy atmosphere that the players engaged in instead of continuing to explore the grounds and seek out the traitor in their midst.  Perhaps this was common in that era, but too much of the side games caused the story to lose focus for me.

This round also had waaay too much pronoun usage that detracted from the sense of immediacy to the story, getting a little too much into telling at times instead of showing.  The beginning was especially noticeable and made it difficult to get into the story.

However, once again the point-of-view delineations were spot on with proper scene and chapters breaks to switch characters.  Editing was better here, with only a couple of missing small words as before and a use of mind instead of mine.  Again, language and a lot of innuendo, drug usage, and skin make this one for mature audiences.  Decent structure but a rambling storyline and characters that didn't stay true give this one three stars.

Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JG07W06
Apple: https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/a-reckless-soul/id845251043
Kobo: http://store.kobobooks.com/en-US/ebook/a-reckless-soul
Nook: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/a-reckless-soul-elizabeth-cole/1119131155?ean=2940149227198
Google Play: https://play.google.com/store/books/details/Elizabeth_Cole_A_Reckless_Soul?id=T2VHAwAAQBAJ
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/21797384-a-reckless-soul-secrets-of-the-zodiac

Author Bio:
Elizabeth Cole is a romance author with a penchant for history, which is why she lives in an old house in an old city. She can be found hanging around libraries and archives, or curled in a corner reading, cat on lap. She believes in love at first sight. Then again, she also believes that mac 'n' cheese is a healthy breakfast, so don't trust her judgment on everything.

Elizabeth is currently writing her SECRETS OF THE ZODIAC series of romantic spy thrillers set in the Regency period. The second novel, A RECKLESS SOUL, is now available. The third will be out this fall.

Elizabeth loves hearing from readers. Connect with her at elizabethcole.co


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