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Showing posts with label book review. Show all posts

Tuesday, June 12, 2018

Next Exit Quarter Mile Release and Review

As promised a few weeks ago, the release day for CW Browning's latest novel in her Exit Series is here - and it's a killer!

Book Blurb:
When Alina Maschik - code name "Viper" - flees Syria, she has a serious problem. Someone knows much more than they should about the elusive assassin. With orders to lie low, Alina returns to Medford, determined to do just that.

But once again, New Jersey refuses to co-operate.

The Casa Reino Cartel is moving mysterious cargo up the Eastern seaboard; a tragic accident in the Pine Barrens kills a local street race; FBI Special Agent John Smithe is looking for answers where there shouldn't be questions; metro area hospitals are stockpiling a new antidote, and an invisible foe has zeroed in on Viper.

A web of intrigue stretching from Damascus to the Pine Barrens has been skillfully cast.  Now, Viper must confront ghosts from her past even as she fights to unravel a sinister plot before thousands of Americans die.

My Review:
NEXT EXIT, QUARTER MILE is the latest offering in the Exit Series – and things are about to change in ways Alina never saw coming.

Viper is told to stand down and returns to New Jersey after being unexpectedly chased across the Middle East to the Amalfi Coast, a strange concept when the assassin is usually the one doing the hunting.  The Organization has a mole that is leaking like a sieve and death lurks just around the corner.

And when the bill comes due, death always collects.

Alina knows this better than most, having lost her brother to enemy fire twelve years ago, prompting her to join the Navy and Naval Intelligence which eventually led her to the Organization.  But the past is sneaking up, ready to explode like the handiwork of the terrorist’s bomb signature she knows all too well.

And he’s coming for more than just Viper this time.

QUARTER MILE is part Fast and Furious, part Taken, and part Jason Bourne, and for a gal that loves cars and things that go ‘splodey, this was a really nice mix.  But it isn’t all street races in this offering.  We are talking about assassins – and even assassins have a human side.

That’s where this novel becomes a pivoting point in the series.  Circumstances from all sides force Alina (and that mysterious Hawk) to explore the humanity that was buried long ago in order to become the weapon of mass destruction her government needed.  But now that that government might be targeting her, she must reexamine the reasons for what she does – and what it has required her to give up.

And in this, Quarter Mile takes a darker turn – and you’ve gotta know how much I like the darkness.  The stakes are high once again and the heat gets turned up on much more than the relationship that has simmered between Viper and Hawk.  There is at times a level of gruesome we haven’t seen before in the prior novels that rivals the torture scene in Taken – and I’m talking the one that didn’t make the cut in the final theatrical release version.  Viper goes deep, and for an assassin that means dark.

Since we’re dealing with so much introspection, the pace at times moves a bit slower than your typical thriller, but there’s so much meat to process in this novel that it’s appreciated.  Things are set up here that promise an explosive next book – and yes, that means that not all loose threads are tied up in this one when it comes to the overall larger story.  But that’s okay in my book.  I like the anticipation of the upcoming possibilities.

As with previous books in this series, there are a few incidences of head-hopping with point-of-view, though it’s much better this time around.  Overuse of eye narrowing, lip twitching, and the word slightly ran rampant at times.  However, these didn’t decrease my overall enjoyment of the novel – especially after that killer ending.

But you’ll have to read it to discover what that is.

Content Warning:  There is usually little about this series that requires much in the way of warning - except the obvious dealings with assassinations.  However, this one requires more caution than usual due to more salty language (nothing outside the normal ie. no f-words to worry about). and there are a couple of more gruesome scenes that might be difficult for some, though nothing I couldn't handle.  For the first time, there is also the insinuation of sex but with very little on-camera activity.  Probably a lot less than teens read in today's YA genre.  Overall, as I usually say, just know your teen.

Another solid outing of the Exit Series, to which I'll again offer up four stars.  I received a complimentary copy of this book for review purposes - but I liked it so much I went ahead and purchased it for my library.

And you can too for the special release week price of $2.99 by clicking HERE.  And as a special release week bonus, you can pick up the first book in the series NEXT EXIT, THREE MILES for free HERE and the second book NEXT EXIT, PAY TOLL for only ninety-nine cents HERE.  Better yet, just pick up the entire series of four books for the rootin'-tootin' low price of $7.97 HERE.  But only for a limited time.

Author Bio:

CW Browning was writing before she could spell. Making up stories with her childhood best friend in the backyard in Olathe, Kansas, imagination ran wild from the very beginning. At the age of eight, she printed out her first full-length novel on a dot-matrix printer. All eighteen chapters of it. Through the years, the writing took a backseat to the mechanics of life. Those mechanics, however, have a great way of underlining what genuinely lifts a spirit and makes the soul sing. After attending Rutgers University and studying History, her love for writing was rekindled. It became apparent where her heart truly lay. Picking up an old manuscript, she dusted it off and went back to what made her whole. CW still makes up stories in her backyard, but now she crafts them for her readers to enjoy. She makes her home in Southern New Jersey, where she loves to grill steak and sip red wine on the patio.

CW loves to hear from readers! She is always willing to answer questions and hear your stories. You can find her on Facebook and Twitter. If social media isn't your thing, she can also be reached by email at cwbrowning12@gmail.com and on her website at www.cwbrowning.com.



Wednesday, August 17, 2016

Love Space Opera? Try DRIFTERS' ALLIANCE

Have I got an intriguing series for you!

If you're into the whole sci-fi space opera genre (think Firefly, Star Trek, etc.) then you need to pick up Elle Casey's DRIFTERS' ALLIANCE series.  Thus far it's only three books, but more are on the way - and I can hardly wait.

Now onto the show.


Book Blurb:
One hand of cards and it's all over but the crying...

Cass Kennedy finally gets what she's been dreaming of for the past ten years: a drifter ship to call her own. All the sim time and battle training is going to pay off in spades as she sets her course for the future. She'll be living on her own terms, not those of her father.

But drifting through deep space with a crew of nutty strangers on the DS Anarchy carries a lot more surprises than she bargained for. Nobody told her that her ship is falling apart, that dead chickens are something you really want to hang on to, and that the OSG has big plans for the universe that don't necessarily jibe with her plans for herself.

Jump onboard with Cass and her crew as she charts a course toward an alliance that will either make her or break her as Captain of the DS Anarchy.

My Review:
Through a game of chance, Cass Kennedy has done the impossible - become captain of her very own drifter ship at the ripe age of nineteen.  Now she can explore the far reaches of dark space with her crew and escape farther from the clutches of the OSG - and her father, a major general of the Omega Systems Group elite command.

But the title of captain comes with its own set of challenges - and mutiny doesn't just happen on the Bounty.  Throw in a questionable stowaway, and Cass' maiden voyage at the helm of the DS Anarchy might just be her last.

Especially if she can't avoid the OSG's warships and those hunting her down for escaping their elite clutches three years ago.  Her only hope?  Become a member of a freedom alliance of other drifter ships.

DRIFTERS' ALLIANCE has a great cast of characters in the vein of that short-lived TV show Firefly.  Cass is no wilting flower and has a closet full of skeletons that threaten to expose her and the crew to the mighty and merciless hand of the OSG's ruling order.  But all crew members, both old and new, hide behind secrets of their own.  Each is drawn as unique, three-dimensional individuals which makes them feel like they could leap from the pages into the real world.

The action takes time to ramp up, but the characters drive the plot forward in the interim, which keeps the pace from bogging down and avoids devolving into a bunch of telling.  The reader is simply dropped into the characters' lives where they are without resorting to a bunch of world-building info dumps.  Instead the world-building is nicely interwoven into the storyline as it plays out.

Editing is smooth and clean, with only one tiny error I noticed in the entire story.  DRIFTERS' ALLIANCE is a quick and entertaining read, with each of the three episodes thus far at just around two hundred pages - and yes, I've already read all three books and am anxiously awaiting the next release.  Five stars from me.

Content Warning:  Strong language is sprinkled throughout, but it fits with the characters and the nature of the story.  Some mild sexual jokes but nothing you wouldn't hear in school or the office.  The following books in the series have some violence and blood with danger to the characters, but again not terribly graphic.

Books one through three can be purchased by clicking here on AMAZON, B&N, and anywhere else books are sold.

Author Bio:
ELLE CASEY, a former attorney and teacher, is a NEW YORK TIMES and USA TODAY bestselling American author who lives in France with her husband, three kids, and a number of furry friends. She has written books in several genres and publishes an average of one full-length novel per month.


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Sunday, August 7, 2016

Dark Thriller Review - All Good Deeds

Hello again, dear readers.  I've got a review for you today for a dark, twisted thriller.  Stacy Green's Lucy Kendall series book one ALL GOOD DEEDS deals with the subject of pedophiles and human trafficking of children.  Oh yes, and murder - Old West style - so this isn't for the faint of heart.  My review is for book one in the series, but I bought and read the package deal of all four books in the series (not including the prequel novella) and recommend you do the same.

If the free first book doesn't make you squirm too much.

Book Blurb:
She's no killer. She's just taking out the trash.

Don’t call Lucy Kendall a serial killer. She’s fighting for the innocent, and she’ll do whatever it takes to bring justice.

When a child disappears, Lucy quickly discovers the link to a predator she’s faced before–a man the state of Pennsylvania decided to turn loose on the streets. Determined to find the little girl and put a criminal behind bars for good, Lucy forces her way onto the case.

As the search for the kidnapped child pulls Lucy into a web of evil beyond her darkest imagination, she’ll have to face her own dark truths to save the little girl–and herself.

Packed with suspense, All Good Deeds is a dark psychological thriller with a finely crafted mystery that takes readers into the deepest recesses of the human psyche.

My Review:
This would've been a five star if not for all of the editing errors (missing words, transpositions, wrong words used, etc.).  As is, I'm giving it four and ahalf stars because everything else about it is fantastic - if you can stomach the subject matter.

Lucy Kendall is a former social worker who quit the system when child pedophiles kept going free because of legal loopholes.  Since then she's obtained her PI license and been on a quest of her own choosing - finding and killing these repeat offenders before they can destroy any other lives.  Lucy practices justice like they did in the Old West - vigilante style.

But killing - even for honorable reasons - is taking a toll on her psyche.  Then someone discovers her secret.

Chris tags along with Lucy in hopes of stemming his own fascination with serial killers - and he has secrets of his own he can't keep in the closet.  When another neighborhood child goes missing, Lucy and Chris discover there are worse things out there on the World Wide Web - and they're in a race to bring down this child trafficking site before another little girl is lost in the ether forever.

Such dark subject matter we have here, but handled so well without short-circuiting and holding back too much or going over the cliff and showing us everything so awful about such a topic.  The plot and pacing races along, just as a thriller should.  Point-of-view is handled well without a bunch of head-hopping in each scene.  Then we are shown all the way along the gut-wrenching ride instead of resorting to a bunch of telling or info-dumping.  This book has everything a great thriller should have.  Like I said, four and ahalf stars from me.

Content warning:  Because we're dealing with the subject of child pedophiles and human trafficking of children, it's difficult to read at times and the emotions it brings out (especially for someone who has been abused) can be devastating.  There's also plenty of language and a few uses of strong language (which seemed a bit overreaching and unnecessary at times), so be aware if you dare.

Book one is free by clicking here on AMAZON.

Author Bio:
Stacy Green is the author of the Lucy Kendall thriller series and the Delta Crossroads mystery trilogy.
ALL GOOD DEEDS (Lucy Kendall #1) won a bronze medal for mystery and thriller at the 2015 IPPY Awards. TIN GOD (Delta Crossroads #1) was runner-up for best mystery/thriller at the 2013 Kindle Book Awards. Stacy has a love of thrillers and crime fiction, and she is always looking for the next dark and twisted novel to enjoy. She started her career in journalism before becoming a stay at home mother and rediscovering her love of writing. She lives in Iowa with her husband and daughter and their three spoiled fur babies. Stacy loves to hear from readers! Visit her website at stacygreenauthor.com, or Facebook at www.Facebook.com/StacyGreenAuthor.

Thursday, July 7, 2016

A Review of LOOK BEFORE YOU JUMP from Books and Bindings

Books and Bindings has a wonderful review of LOOK BEFORE YOU JUMP, book one in the Bartender Babe Chronicles, over on their blog.  Thanks much to Empress DJ for taking the time to read my book and for the great review.  When you have a chance, run on over and check it out by clicking HERE.  Reviewers are so appreciated here at DA Bale Publishing, because I understand the investment of time it takes not only to read the book but to write a concise review as well.  I look forward to reading her thoughts of book two.

And don't forget about the Smashwords Summer/Winter Sale 2016, where you can pick up an eBook copy of LOOK BEFORE YOU JUMP for free by using the coupon code SFREE at checkout.  Click HERE for the product page.

I hope your summer is going well, dear readers.  I'll soon have a few reviews of my own to share with you soon.

Friday, July 1, 2016

Happy July Housekeeping Updates

Happy July, dear readers!

Just a how-dee-do housekeeping post today to update you on things both new and old.  After writing and publishing two novels so far this year, I haven't done a good job keeping you up-to-date on what's happening in the little blogosphere corner that is DA Bale Publishing.  So here goes!

As part of the Smashwords summer reading promotion, I've offered up LOOK BEFORE YOU JUMP for their free campaign promotion.  From July 1st through July 31st, you can pick up a free copy of this first novel in the Bartender Babe Chronicles through Smashwords - and only through Smashwords - by clicking HERE and using the coupon code SFREE at checkout.

I've also enrolled my short story THE STUDY for this promotion as well,which you can click HERE to pickup - just use the same coupon code at checkout.


If you take a gander to your right here on the blog, you can also enter the latest Goodreads giveaway for a chance to win one of five autographed print copies of PIERCING THE DARKNESS, the second novel in the Deepest Darkness series.  This opportunity is slated to run from July 1st through August 15th, so sign up before it's too late.

Lastly, we have an Independence Day sale going on here at DA Bale Publishing for the month of July.  We recently partnered with a digital media specialist to offer affordable, professional book cover designs.  You can click on the tab above or HERE to see some of the currently available options.  The good news for the authors in the audience is that during this sale, you can pick up one of these pre-made covers for the low price of $35 - a savings of $40 over the custom design price.  Just email dabalepublishing@cox.net with your cover of choice and your book title and author name, and we'll get a PayPal invoice sent over to complete your purchase.

Watch for some upcoming reviews of some great books I've read the last couple of weeks.  As always, happy reading and have a safe and happy Fourth!

Friday, April 1, 2016

Time Again For Some Southern Spooks

Today let's revisit a series of cozy mysteries by Angie Fox.  I'm talking the Southern Ghost Hunter Mysteries.  You can read my reviews of the first two HERE, but needless to say, I've enjoyed the colorful characters, creepy trips through history, and witnessed an unlikely pairing or two.

Plus I'm anxious to be on the front lines when Verity's almost-ex-mother-in-law gets her comeuppance.  It's long overdue in my book.

So time to introduce you to book three in the Southern Ghost Hunter Mysteries - THE HAUNTED HEIST.

Book Blurb:
Just because she can see the dead doesn’t mean Verity Long wants to spend her days hunting ghosts. Instead, she’s over the moon to land a marketing job at the local bank…until she finds her new boss dead in the vault. Even her ghost friend, Frankie, knows that's no way to start a career. 

Relieved to let the police take charge, Verity steps aside, bound and determined to keep her ghost sightings to herself. But when she learns the main suspect in the murder is a very crooked, very dead mobster, Verity knows it's up to her to solve the case. 

She teams up with her ghostly gangster buddy Frankie, as well as the irresistible and charming Ellis, as the three of them search haunted mob hideouts, hidden passageways, and historic cemeteries for the facts behind the heist of the century—and a modern-day motive for murder. 

Too bad uncovering the truth could very well make Verity the next victim... 

My Review:
Upfront confession time - I've really struggled with writing my review and rating this book.  There's nothing wrong with the writing in relation to structure, so I'll not belabor that issue.  It's just with this third book there was a lack of charm, humor, and wittiness I've come to expect from this series.  The first two were great.  This one...not so much.

The gang's all here though:  intrepid and never-give-up Verity Long, our goofy gangster ghost Frankie, Lucy the sweet pet skunk, best bud Lauralee, and who could forget hunky almost-brother-in-law Ellis Wydell.

Verity's still clinging to the antebellum manor left to her by her grandmother after Virginia Wydell went after her with a court order demanding repayment for the wedding Verity missed - namely with Virginia's good-for-nothing son Beau.  But if financial circumstances don't turn around soon, Verity may lose the little she still has left.

Enter Lauralee's uncle, returned from Chicago to take over First Sugarland Bank - and provide Verity with her first paying graphic design job since the epic breakup.  It couldn't have come at a better time, what with her own bank account inching closer toward zero.  But faster than you can say 'murder' circumstances again fall out of Verity's favor.  Now not only does Verity need Frankie's 'ghostvision' to help her solve this crime, but she might even have to resort to talking to the ghost of the area's most notorious hit man when evidence points in his direction.

But a ghost can't manipulate objects on this side of the veil - can he?

Like I said, I really liked the first two in this series, which is probably one of the reasons I felt let down with this installment. The humor present in the first two was completely lacking in this one, the characters seeming to go through the motions and yet falling short.  When things get tough for Verity, Frankie is usually there to offer up a differing perspective - no matter how odd.  But in book three, Frankie is down and depressed, unable to break free of being bound to Verity's property and depending on her to escort him around town via his urn.  The humor he usually provides is absent and he serves merely to bring Verity down and get her into one scrape after another, though she tries everything she can think of to help free Frankie.  

Then we have the budding relationship with Ellis.  While I still like the dynamic of the secret relationship they have as the brother of Verity's ex-fiance, here Ellis forces the relationship more into the open, with no regard for the recent trauma Verity barely survived when standing up to the matriarch of the wealthy Wydell clan.  After the events of the second book, I was really hoping to see some of the results of that wrap-up here and see Ellis stand up to his mother.  Sadly, this never happens, which showed a surprising lack of compassion and complete disregard toward Verity.  Ellis even goes so far as to get angry with Verity and verbally browbeat her for her hesitation and fear of his mother, even though again nothing he's done up to that point provides Verity with any assurance he will stand with her in her corner.

The one thing in this book that did provide a little bit of humor was discovering the secret speakeasy, where the ghosts of the South Town Gang and other colorful characters from an era long gone regularly party and 'kill' each other nightly for fun and sport. Now that was a riotous brawl of good times.  But this was the only bright spot in an otherwise downer read.

Do I still want to read the next release in this series?  Certainly.  I have high hopes that at some point Virginia Wydell will get served with more than tea and scones.  Am I still waiting to witness Verity's inevitable rise from being trod underfoot by Sugarland's snooty elite?  Absolutely.  It's going to be totally cool now that Verity's secrets are out of the bag.  But for this outing I'll offer up three stars.

You can find Angie Fox's THE HAUNTED HEIST in eBook and paperback formats on AMAZON, BARNES AND NOBLE, and anywhere else books are sold.

Author Bio:
New York Times bestselling author Angie Fox writes sweet, fun, action-packed paranormal mystery and romance. Her characters are clever and fearless, but in real life, Angie is afraid of basements, bees, and going up stairs when it is dark behind her. Let's face it. Angie wouldn't last five minutes in one of her books.

Angie is best known for her Southern Ghost Hunter mysteries and for her Accidental Demon Slayer books. She lives in St. Louis, with her football-addicted husband, two kids, and Moxie the dog.

Sign up here: http://eepurl.com/bUrBDT to find out when her next release is coming out.

Visit Angie online:
Website: www.angiefox.com
Twitter: www.twitter.com/AngieFoxauthor
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/176533609089557


Wednesday, March 23, 2016

Like Space Opera? Read STARRIE

For those of you who enjoy science fiction and space opera genres, I've got a great little book for you.  It's full of action, intrigue, and some far-out experiences in a galaxy far, far away.

No, it's not STAR WARS, it's Heidi Ruby Miller's novel STARRIE.  Check out my review from Amazon below.

Book Blurb:
SPACE OPERA WITH AN ENSEMBLE CAST!

In this caste-ruled society, where multiple partners are the norm, celebrity, beauty, and power mean everything. Love and jealousy are considered emotional fallacies, nothing more than fleeting moods and sentiments biased by hormones. But sometimes people just fall in love...and that can be deadly.

Ben Anlow and his team embark on a revenge mission to bring down serial murderer and rapist, Liu Stavros, at his fortress in the inhospitable mountains of Tampa Three. But contractor Naela Starrie already has her own kind of vengeance planned for Stavros. Even as a battle-hardened soldier, Ben's not prepared for the darkness he sees in the female assassin, nor the way she challenges his prejudices about her people when she makes a sacrifice to save to his life.

My Review:
STARRIE is Firefly meets Battlestar Galactica - and it's a non-stop ride through terraformed planets.

Having previously read the first novel in the AMBASSADORA universe, I was well aware of Ms. Miller's excellent writing style and pleased to have the chance to read this side story set within as well. It's always nice to read a novel that is well plotted, uses point-of-view properly, and is free of irritating errors that slow so many stories down. So since there is no need for me to breakdown those elements here, let's move onto the storyline.

The world-building in STARRIE is excellent, and if you're like me and have had at least some exposure to the space opera genre in books, movies, or television, you'll easily find yourself enmeshed in the fictional universe created here. I cracked up with the 'docking' euphemism (think about it) and several other word usages that took on whole new meaning here. Even with such a far-out-there imaginative world, the story never bogs down with heavy-handed telling and achingly long descriptions (thank you!), while the action continues to keep things moving forward at a well-paced clip. There are familiar tie-ins with some of the elements from MARKED BY LIGHT that were nice to see and get a better feel for in this outing. And, of course, there's the Anlow brothers.

We open with Ben Anlow and his team on a mission to take out a sick and twisted member of the Embassy, the ruling order, on the frozen planet of Tampa Three's highest peak, Durstal Ki. But someone else got to Stavros just before them, a contractor assassin on the Embassy's payroll. Through a series of dire circumstances, Ben is separated from his team and must depend upon Naela Starrie, the assassin in question, to get him off of Tampa Three or at least keep him alive and safe from the hunters until contact can be made to the outside world. Naela knows who is hunting them, and her crazed cousin won't stop until he has what he's always wanted - her.

After a genetically altered puma attack on Tampa Three marred the team's own attack plan atop Durstal Ki, Char must race to get her prime back to civilization before the blood loss and poison have their final effect. But that means leaving the team's leader behind in the hands of a deadly assassin - and also explaining to Embassy officials why their mission failed.

Like I said, excellent pacing, nearly non-stop action, and great world-building (not to mention an error-free experience) make STARRIE a fabulous read for those who enjoy science fiction, particularly the aforementioned shows. I guess that means I'm exposing my nerdy/geeky side.  I did get a little dizzy and had trouble following all of the media drones toward the end and how the characters' recorders worked, but that was only a minor annoyance.  Content warnings: graphic and bloody violence (dismemberment), mild sexual situations, and strong language usage throughout, so definitely an 18+ read. For the wild adventure, five stars from me.

Pick up a copy if science fiction and space opera are up your alley by clicking here on AMAZON.  Oh, and you can also enter for a chance to win a paperback copy over on Goodreads if you sign up soon by clicking HERE.

Author Bio:

Heidi Ruby Miller uses research for her stories as an excuse to roam the globe. With degrees in Anthropology, Geography, Foreign Languages, and Writing, she knew early that penning fast-paced, exotic adventures would be her life. She's put her experiences and studies to paper in her far-future AMBASADORA series and into her two new thriller series.

In between trips, Heidi teaches creative writing at Seton Hill University, where she graduated from their renowned Writing Popular Fiction Graduate Program the same month she appeared on Who Wants To Be A Millionaire. AMBASADORA was her thesis novel there, and the multi-award winning writing guide MANY GENRES, ONE CRAFT, which she co-edited with Michael A. Arnzen, is based on the Seton Hill program and was named #5 in The Writer magazine's Ten Most Terrific Writing Books of 2011.

She has had various fiction and non-fiction publications, as well as various jobs, including contract archaeologist, foreign currency exchanger at Walt Disney World, foreign language teacher, and educational marketing director for Frank Lloyd Wright's House on Kentuck Knob. In 2012, Heidi created the Dog Star Books science fiction imprint for Raw Dog Screaming Press and was the managing editor for the line for three years. Recently, she was the Director of Professional Writing Relations for the Pennsylvania Literary Festival, an event she co-founded in 2014.

Her formal memberships include The Authors Guild, International Thriller Writers, Pennwriters, and Science Fiction Poetry Association. Heidi is fond of high-heeled shoes, action movies, chocolate, and tea of any sort. She lives near Pittsburgh with her award-winning writer husband, Jason Jack Miller, and a sweet little kitty. Visit her at www.heidirubymiller.com.


Saturday, January 23, 2016

Two-4-One Book Review

It's been awhile, dear readers, but I recently came across a delightful cozy mystery series and wish to share it with you.  Previously I'd read the first in Angie Fox's Accidental Demon Slayer series, so I was familiar with her work there.  This new series is also well-written and a bit more interesting to a historical buff like me - plus it has a wonderful array of ghosts from the Civil War era.  What could be better than that?

Since I've already posted reviews on Amazon, I'm doing things a little backward and am just going to cut and paste said reviews here.  They're not my usual anal-nut-bag compilations, but hopefully they'll still tweak your interest in trying out the Southern Ghost Hunter Mysteries. Enjoy!

Southern Spirits Book Blurb:
One simple mistake…
For a girl who is about to lose her family home,
Releases the ghost of a long-dead gangster,
And opens Verity Long’s eyes to a whole new world.

When out of work graphic designer Verity Long accidentally traps a ghost on her property, she’s saddled with more than a supernatural sidekick—she gains the ability see spirits. It leads to an offer she can’t refuse from the town’s bad boy, the brother of her ex and the last man she should ever partner with.

Ellis Wydell is in possession of a stunning historic property haunted by some of Sugarland Tennessee’s finest former citizens. Only some of them are growing restless—and destructive. He hires Verity to put an end to the disturbances. But soon, Verity learns there’s more to the mysterious estate than floating specters, secret passageways, and hidden rooms.

There’s a modern day mystery afoot, one that hinges on a decades-old murder. Verity isn't above questioning the living, or the dead. But can she discover the truth before the killer finds her?

My Review:
First off a little clarification on the ranking - 4 1/2 stars (I wish they offered half stars for reviews). I've previously read the first book in Ms. Fox's Demon Slayer series, so when this popped up on my radar I thought it sounded fun and interesting with the ghostly element instead of demons, vampires, and all the other popular supernatural characters these days.

We open with Verity after a desperate estate sale in attempt to save the beloved antebellum home she inherited from her grandmother. The only things Verity held back from the auction block were her futon, her grandmother's wedding ring and handmade quilts, and an awful decorative urn given to her by her fiance - that is, her ex-fiance. But even with the sacrifices she's still $20,000 short, and the vultures are circling to collect on the bill after she dumped the most eligible catch of Sugarland, Tennessee at the altar. A mother will do anything out of revenge for a jilted son, even if it means taking the ex for all she's got and destroying Verity's name in the process.

So call Verity surprised because the urn is full of dust and no amount of scrubbing will get all of the crud unstuck from the creases and crevices inside. But it isn't dust but ashes, leaving her with a ghost not only bound to the grounds where she dumped and watered them in with her roses but bound to the urn - and wherever the urn goes Frankie's ghost does as well. Like Verity needed anymore complications.

But then a killer awakens from slumber, and Verity needs Frankie's help and 'ghostvision' to solve a decades old murder. That's when you-know-what hits the fan.

I really enjoyed this well-written story, though it wasn't difficult to spot the who-done-it-character. We're brought right into the drama and led along the way as things unfold. Verity's backstory and recent troubles come out in bits and pieces, not dumping the reader with paragraph after paragraph of telling what happened but leading us along the way by showing as the storyline and characters progressed. The story had elements of humor and mystery that held interest without going overlong. It was pretty much the perfect length.

The only thing I'd liked to have had a bit more of was the description of the distillery and the whole tunnel aspect. I found this very difficult to picture and follow at times. But this was merely a minor annoyance. Initially I also realized the story didn't have much colorful language to trip over - and I found that rather pleasant. But then one use of the f-word was thrown in at random and felt very out-of-place, as if only utilized for shock value. I'm no prude and am used to reading material with sometimes hard language, but this just didn't seem to fit with the overall tone of the story.

The biggest praise any reviewer could give to a novel in a series is to say they want to read the next one. Now I'm off to buy book two!

The Skeleton in the Closet Book Blurb:
A haunted library is no place for a girl who can see ghosts, but when Verity Long stumbles on a dead body in the middle of the main reading room, she has to believe someone…even a dead someone…must have witnessed the crime.

Her ghostly sidekick Frankie warns her to stay out of it. The very alive, very handsome deputy sheriff, Ellis Wydell, inadvertently places her directly in the middle of it. And her ex-fiancé, Ellis’s brother, is back with an agenda of his own.

Undaunted, Verity presses forward, uncovering scandalous secrets, long-forgotten ghosts, and a shocking trail of clues that places her directly in the path of a killer.

My Review:
I received a free copy of this novel from NetGalley, but it has no influence on my review.

After reading the delightful first book in the series, I was pleased to have the opportunity to read this second as well. The mysteries are light, the characters engaging, and there's plenty of ghostly fun - especially with Frankie.

'Skeleton' opens weeks after 'Southern's end when the entire town of Sugarland, TN is preparing for their annual Civil War reproduction honoring events surrounding the Cannonball in the Wall, when Union and Confederate troops clashed and the Gray chased off the Blue. As one of the busy-bee workers at Sugarland's library, Verity's sister Melody is swamped with never-ending preparations for the library dinner, auction, and memorabilia display highlighting the two most influential - and bitterest of rival - families in town.

Did I also mention one of those families is overseen by her ex almost mother-in-law? You remember - the one who sought to ruin Verity after leaving her beloved baby boy standing at the altar.

Now Beau is back and trying desperately to reclaim what was once his - even though he has no clue that his current rival for Verity's affections is his older brother. Yep, Deputy Sheriff Ellis Wydell, middle son and black sheep of the family when he chucked the legal legacy and struck out on his own in favor of serving God and country, has taken a shining to Verity and her ghost-seeing abilities. And now he needs her more than ever to help solve the murder of Melody's assistant on the eve of the town's biggest holiday this side of Christmas.

Cue Frankie, the gangster ghost of Ellis' great-great uncle and Verity's sidekick after he was 'grounded' when Verity mistakenly emptied his ashes and thoroughly watered them into one of her grandma's prized rose bushes. It's gonna take more than Frankie's ghostly powers to clean up the mess this particular murder leaves.

Once again, we have our familiar cast of ghosts back to haunt this story: Jilted Josephine, Ma Hatcher, and of course, Frankie, along with an ever growing assortment of spooks and specters of varying backgrounds and abilities. I really enjoy how Verity calms and helps some of those disturbed ghosts move on a la Ghost Whisperer, yet the lighthearted atmosphere of the story rarely dims and gets too serious. She's become even more of a shoulder to cry on in this installment, and even though she's terrified, Verity always shows her strength and perseveres - because it's the right thing to do.

I also enjoyed how the key events from book one were woven into the earlier chapters of the second novel without laying down a huge bunch of telling by info dumping. POV stays clearly with Verity throughout and we are once again led through a fun maze to reveal some great elements for some of the characters and not so great situations for others - which has me dying to read the next novel in the series to see how this moment of comeuppance plays out long-term.

My only complaint is that the perpetrator was rather obvious, yet the motivation for stooping to murder/attempted murder didn't feel fully fleshed out. The red herring was also quite obvious, and yet when it is shown this individual had knowledge of the events and the cover-up yet no direct involvement in the murder, nothing happened to this person. I'm trying to be very careful here so I don't spoil anything for future readers, so I'll stop with this.

Again, a well-written second installment to this series, with good characters, fun situations, and an engaging plot even with the shortcoming noted. I look forward to the third release.

Purchase either Southern Spirits or The Skeleton in the Closet on Amazon or for your eReader of choice.

Author Bio:
New York Times bestselling author Angie Fox writes sweet, fun, action-packed paranormal mystery
and romance. Her characters are clever and fearless, but in real life, Angie is afraid of basements, bees, and going up stairs when it is dark behind her. Let's face it. Angie wouldn't last five minutes in one of her books.

Angie is best known for her Southern Ghost Hunter mysteries and for her Accidental Demon Slayer books. She lives in St. Louis, with her football-addicted husband, two kids, and Moxie the dog.

Visit Angie online:
Website: www.angiefox.com
Twitter: www.twitter.com/AngieFoxauthor
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Angie-Fox/176533609089557

Saturday, July 25, 2015

Rounding Out the Reviews with NEXT EXIT, PAY TOLL

There are just some authors who keep bringing you back for more - and that's what we have here today.  After having read the series somewhat out of order (see review of third HERE and first HERE), I'm pleased to bring to you CW Browning's second novel in her Exit series - NEXT EXIT, PAY TOLL.  This one was well worth the wait.

Book Blurb:
All sins are punished one day.

For the ruthless traitor protected deep within Washington, DC, that day has come. Alina Maschik has only one goal: find, expose, and eliminate the person who brought a terrorist onto United States soil. For an assassin trained to hunt for a living, this was a straight-forward, text-book mission. But nothing is ever simple with Alina. Unjustly labeled a rogue agent, she's made it to the top of America's Most Wanted list, her own government wants her dead, and everyone close to her is becoming a target. Now, in order to protect those she loves, Alina must work quickly to uncover the traitor...before they uncover her.

Viper returns in the riveting sequel to Next Exit, 3 Miles, determined to ensure that a national traitor pays for their sins, once and for all.

My Review:
I have to confess - I love this series!  This second novel in the series of three thus far is two thumbs up in my book.  The characters are rich, deep, and three-dimensional.  There are so many luscious layers to peel away to get to the heart of our main characters, and it's a delicious journey getting there.

That's what keeps drawing me back - the characters.  Alina - code name Viper - is a tough chick, with an ingrained sense of justice and right versus wrong.  When she's on the hunt, she's like a bloodhound on the scent.

And that fox ain't gonna get away!

Throw in a little Hawk - real name Damon - and things get fun, not to mention complicated, real quick.

After the culmination of THREE MILES, we begin PAY TOLL a few months later, with Alina hiding in plain sight, flirting with danger, and ready to kick some major butt.  The fearless Feds come after her - but they've got it all wrong.  A high-ranking insider in the D.C. scene paid a well-known but rarely seen international assassin to create chaos on U.S. soil.

However, Alina foiled those plans - and now the crazed perpetrator wants her to pay by placing a target on not only her back but on everyone who helped the Viper.

But as he always has, the Hawk has the Viper's back.

To tell you anymore would be a disservice to those who like a twisted mystery tied up with a thrill ride.  Needless to say, there are explosions of ALL sorts waiting in PAY TOLL.  Even though each main story arc is tied up by the end of each book, there is a real benefit from starting at the beginning and moving forward, as the little things presented in the background of book one explode to the forefront of book two.

Even though I like this series, there are still technical issues that cause gnashing of teeth.  There is a continual overuse of several 'ly' words - in this episode 'slightly' stands at the forefront - as well as a lot of eye narrowing.  Easy fixes.  Yes, most of you by now also know I am a purist when it comes to a single point-of-view per scene/chapter.  PAY TOLL jumps POV around from head-to-head throughout a scene or chapter, which can at times be jarring.

However, the plotting and pacing are excellent - moving along in this one at a greater pace than either of the others at this stage.  As mentioned, the characters are rich and varied.  Scenes are explosive with lots of showing instead of telling (yay!) and we get a good sense of motivation on behalf of our fearsome duo.

If it weren't for the POV issues, this one would easily get a fiver from me.  As it stands - oh heck - I'm feeling generous tonight and will overlook my usual fussiness.  NEXT EXIT, PAY TOLL earns a five star.

Content Warning:  Minimal use of coarse language.  Slight steam in the kettle in one scene, but it tames quickly.  Explosions, death, and assassinations constitute some violence that would be a bit much for younger teens.

Purchase a copy at Amazon.  And don't forget to pick up the first one HERE and the third one HERE.

Author Bio:
CW Browning was writing before she could spell. Making up stories in the backyard with her childhood best friend, imagination ran wild from the very beginning. When she moved to New Jersey from Kansas at the age of seven, those tales became written words as she adjusted to life on the East Coast. Her first full-length novel was printed out on a dot-matrix printer at the age of eight. Through the years, the writing continued as an enjoyable past-time while she pursued other avenues of interest, attending Rutgers University and studying History. In time, though, it became apparent where her heart truly lie. CW still makes up stories in her backyard, but now she crafts them for her readers to enjoy. She makes her home in Southern New Jersey, where she loves to grill organic steak and sip red wine on the patio.

Visit her at: www.cwbrowning.com
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Friday, October 10, 2014

Something for Halloween in "Shadowcursed"

Let's travel once again to the fantasy realm, where magic reigns supreme, where spirits whisper in our dreams, and good and evil collide.

Join me as I explore Gelo Fleisher's debut fantasy novella Shadowcursed.

Book Blurb:
Bolen is a thief, plying his trade under the spires of an ancient and sprawling city. Worried that he's growing too old, Bolen has lined up a risky job, just to prove that he can still pull one off.

Tonight, he's going to break into a nobleman's vault and help himself to its contents. What he doesn't know is that inside is the key to a secret as old as the city itself.

Kings have killed for it, demons have coveted it, priests have prayed for it, and in a few moments it will be in his hands. And when it is, the adventure of his life will begin.

My Review:
I don't know if I'd call it an adventure, but it's definitely an intriguing read with equal parts fantasy and horror.  Oh, and I love the cover!  It makes me think of the medieval setting in the movie Van Helsing.

Bolen is an aging thief who's never known any other way to keep food in his belly.  His only friends aren't really friends, just those who use his skills to ply their own trade and fill their pockets.  But he's got to figure out something else to do to keep a roof over his head as age wears him down, because the thought of dying an agonizing death by losing his grip and falling from a rooftop has become a very real probability.  When the chance to break into the treasury of Lord Falasade presents itself, Bolen foolishly agrees.

He just never imagined one last job would lead to the gates of hell.

Lord Falasade's family has carried a secret that whispers through the night - a darkness of pure evil resides within the city, a life of death connected to the great ruling house that slowly slips even the strongest mind into fragile madness.  Once the torch passed to him, Falasade never had a choice in the manner of cruelty handed out to the people.  The evil eats away at his soul as the years pass, until an unlikely event offers a chance at reprieve.

But Lord Falasade's mind is too far gone to accomplish the task - and there is only one who possesses the ability to free him and the village from bondage and ultimate destruction.

It took a little bit to get going, but I eventually found Shadowcursed to be a good story in the fight of good and evil.  Once the story engaged me, the plot moved forward with additional characters and situations then quickly built into an explosive finale.  Bolen and even Lord Falasade became sympathetic characters as the story wove toward the finishline.  The evil character, Markus, was creepy and frightening, which is where the horror element really came into play.

Good showing usage kept the story moving as all of the elements came together.  There were a few places where I'd have preferred a little more development, as the events felt rushed and almost skipped over to the point they didn't really need a mention.  Bolen was nicely developed as a character, but I'd really have liked to see more fleshing-out of Lord Falasade.  The witch, Miina, a tool used by the evil character Markus, was really not developed in any way to the point I felt she wasn't even necessary to the story.  In truth, there was so much here that could've been utilized to tell a much longer and much deeper story, and I'd earnestly liked to have seen what would've happened with a more fully developed story as a whole.  There was a lot of potential here for an epic, full-length novel.

Editing was fairly clean.  Point-of-view had just a few moments where it wavered between characters, almost as if dipping your toe into the water - you're not fully in and yet you're not fully out either.  It stopped me a few times, but a minor change in wording would alleviate this sense of stepping into two character heads at once.

Overall, I enjoyed Shadowcursed, though I'd still love to see how this would develop as a full-length novel.  Right on the cusp of taking a good fantasy story and making it great leave me with a rating of four stars.

Purchase a copy for your eReader of choice at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, or Smashwords.

Author Bio:
Gelo R. Fleisher is an author and game developer. He lives in the East Coast, with his wife and daughter.

Some interesting facts about Gelo: He's lived in America, Korea, Japan, and Mongolia. He's a Certified Public Accountant and graduated first in his class from the Wharton school of business. His writing has won several literary contests and has been nominated for a Reader's Choice Award. His indie game development work has also won several awards and has been showcased in PC Gamer magazine. He loves hearing from people so feel free to email him!  Contact him through his website at http://gfleisher.blogspot.com/

Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Two-4-One Review of Secrets of the Zodiac Series

Today I'm going to do something a little different.  I have not one, but two novels to review, and since they're written by the same author and part of a series, I decided to offer my thoughts here on both in one post.  The main reason is because I was initially asked by the publisher to review the recently released second book, so I asked if I could read the first one as well - which I actually liked better.

Thus, it is two-for-one day here at the blog as I set out to offer you reviews of Elizabeth Cole's A Heartless Design and A Reckless Soul both part of the 'Secrets of the Zodiac' series.  Shall we begin?

Book Blurb - A Heartless Design:
An enigmatic woman, a determined spy, and a love that could shake the foundations of Europe…

“Heartless” Cordelia Bering refuses every marriage offer she receives. Yet men still try to win her, drawn by her sharp wit and intoxicating green eyes. But Cordelia knows a marriage could reveal her deepest secret and truly endanger her life. Besides, she hasn’t met a man worth considering, until...

Sebastien Thorne, a spy in the service of the Crown. One of the elite agents in the group known as the Zodiac, he comes to London determined to solve a mystery with roots on the Continent. He won’t let anything distract him. But is Cordelia a distraction, or the key to the mystery? As he learns more about the “heartless” woman, he becomes embroiled in secrets, plots, and a design that could change the future…and Cordelia is at the center of it all.

A HEARTLESS DESIGN is the first book in the Secrets of the Zodiac, a series that blends romantic suspense with the rich background of the Regency period.

My Review - A Heartless Design:
Cordelia Bering is well past her prime in the eyes of the English ton, where marriage deals are made every day to sustain treasuries and perpetuate the noble family lines for inheritance.  It isn't that Cordelia is against marriage - she's just against the concept of a man 'owning' her and directing every aspect of her life, especially if it is against her will.  Because if any man knew of her secret life's passion, he'd have every right to command her to cease and desist to protect the family name.

Cordelia's well-known father taught her everything he knew about engineering and design.  Near the end of his life, it was Cordelia who answered the letters from the scientific community, offered engineering insight, drew the designs, and set Napoleon Bonaparte's sights upon a revolutionary ship destined for the British Navy unless his agents could secure the plans first.

Sebastien Thorne, the recently elevated Earl of Thornberry, was once the reckless second son until the military offered discipline and direction.  With his particular skill-set, it also offered a chance to be an agent in the super-secret British spy network known only as the Zodiac, a group so secret that few in Parliament knew of its existence.  When word seeps into London of a special ship design that could change the course of the war, Sebastien is ordered to discover it at all costs.

As this was presented as a spy novel, I grabbed it up.  I really enjoyed the characters in A Heartless Design, especially the strong, determined, and yet still feminine Cordelia.  She's not afraid to buck tradition for the greater good.  I loved her staff and how dedicated they each were to the other - you'll have to read the book to fully appreciate what is meant here.  Characters were well-established and fully fleshed out (at times a little too much for my taste, if you get my meaning).  The only thing I questioned about characterization was Cordelia's sudden decision to throw caution to the wind and compromise herself so readily.  I could have done without that or perhaps more leading up to it to make the motivation more organic and plausible. 

Pacing moved along well and never felt bogged down.  Certain elements are kept on the periphery and left hanging to entice the reader toward the second book, but the main elements are wrapped up well here so that it can be a full-fledged stand alone novel.  Very little telling and mostly showing kept the events moving along as they were happening. I applaud the proper use of point-of-view - yay!!!  It's always nice to stay firmly in one character's POV per scene and makes reading much more enjoyable.

There were quite a few instances of small missing words like to, and, etc.  However, another editing run-through could clean these up nicely.  A bit of language and waaaay too much skin make this for mature audiences only.  Good structure and an interesting story with strong characters give this one four stars.

Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00F281DM4
Apple: https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/a-heartless-design/id691435953
Kobo: http://store.kobobooks.com/en-US/ebook/a-heartless-design
Nook: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/a-heartless-design-elizabeth-cole/1116870633
Google Play: https://play.google.com/store/books/details/Elizabeth_Cole_A_Heartless_Design?id=YJlDAgAAQBAJ
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/21423885-a-heartless-design

Book Blurb - A Reckless Soul
A seductive agent, a disillusioned lord, and a web of deceit only they can untangle…

Sophie Bertrand is skilled in acting, espionage, and the subtle art of seduction. An independent spirit, she fought her way from rough streets to the top secret circle of spies known as the Zodiac. Her newest assignment is one of her most delicate yet: hunt down a traitor within Britain’s own government. But there’s a catch…this time she can't work alone.

Bruce Allander has a title, honor, wealth...but he’d trade it all to restore his family. The Zodiac gives him a chance for justice in a world that's already taken too much from him. Now he finds himself close to this captivating Frenchwoman—possibly too close. Sophie defies all his expectations, yet in her he senses a kindred soul.

Passion draws the two together, but a web of betrayals threatens to tear them apart. To survive, they have to trust each other. They have to be a little reckless…

A RECKLESS SOUL is the second book in the Secrets of the Zodiac, a series that blends romantic suspense with the rich background of the Regency period.

My Review - A Reckless Soul
Sophie Bertrand is a product of the Parisian theatre, tossed to the streets when her mother was killed during the purge of the Revolution.  With the frame and ability to present herself as either male or female - and an attitude to match - Sophie was offered reprieve by a British gentleman who whisked her away from the terrors of France and transformed her into a spy for her adopted country.  As the only female of the Zodiac, Sophie works alone to maintain her carefully guarded secret, until she is teamed with another agent to stop a traitor among their ranks.

Lord Forester, aka Bruce Allander to his friends, is an intimidating specimen within the British ton - not for his looks but for his dizzying physique.  But he doesn't have time to humor mothers who toss their available daughters his way.  He'd much rather be working the lands of his family estates or traipsing behind enemy lines for the sake of his country.  But when his newest mission involves rooting out a turncoat in Parliament, Bruce would rather be anywhere than playing husband to a female agent among expatriates in the north country - especially when the agent's allegiances are called into question.

After reading the first in this series, I was a bit disappointed with this second outing.  Though I enjoyed seeing how Sophie had made an unnamed appearance in book one, I felt that the characterizations here were not fully developed - though they had opportunity to be.  It was almost like there was so much background to Sophie to hint at without any of these given enough attention, the depth of her character never completely came through.  For my tastes, Bruce often came across as almost girlie and sappy instead of a strong and capable agent in his own right.  The characters swung back and forth like a pendulum so much that they never felt like flesh and blood people with solid internal motivations.

The story continued to move forward, but at times it bogged down with too little to do when the couple traveled to the north country to join the expatriate community.  Their purposes were lost in the odd assortment of drug parties, trading partners for sexual favors, and a sense of an almost orgy atmosphere that the players engaged in instead of continuing to explore the grounds and seek out the traitor in their midst.  Perhaps this was common in that era, but too much of the side games caused the story to lose focus for me.

This round also had waaay too much pronoun usage that detracted from the sense of immediacy to the story, getting a little too much into telling at times instead of showing.  The beginning was especially noticeable and made it difficult to get into the story.

However, once again the point-of-view delineations were spot on with proper scene and chapters breaks to switch characters.  Editing was better here, with only a couple of missing small words as before and a use of mind instead of mine.  Again, language and a lot of innuendo, drug usage, and skin make this one for mature audiences.  Decent structure but a rambling storyline and characters that didn't stay true give this one three stars.

Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00JG07W06
Apple: https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/a-reckless-soul/id845251043
Kobo: http://store.kobobooks.com/en-US/ebook/a-reckless-soul
Nook: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/a-reckless-soul-elizabeth-cole/1119131155?ean=2940149227198
Google Play: https://play.google.com/store/books/details/Elizabeth_Cole_A_Reckless_Soul?id=T2VHAwAAQBAJ
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/21797384-a-reckless-soul-secrets-of-the-zodiac

Author Bio:
Elizabeth Cole is a romance author with a penchant for history, which is why she lives in an old house in an old city. She can be found hanging around libraries and archives, or curled in a corner reading, cat on lap. She believes in love at first sight. Then again, she also believes that mac 'n' cheese is a healthy breakfast, so don't trust her judgment on everything.

Elizabeth is currently writing her SECRETS OF THE ZODIAC series of romantic spy thrillers set in the Regency period. The second novel, A RECKLESS SOUL, is now available. The third will be out this fall.

Elizabeth loves hearing from readers. Connect with her at elizabethcole.co


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Wednesday, August 27, 2014

Taking a Trip on "The Road to Nyn"

I've got a charming little fantasy adventure to share with you today.  From nine to ninety-nine, it's sure to offer entertainment to keep those young ones reading between the pages of a social studies textbook.  Join me as we explore Brian G. Michaud's young adult fantasy The Road to Nyn.

Book Blurb:
In a land where magic is outlawed, a young boy is living a double life. Although Kay is training to be a knight, he has been secretly studying the forbidden ways of magic with Alamin, a powerful but eccentric wizard. When a band of goblins raids his village and enslaves his family and friends, Kay embarks on an adventure that takes him across the Kingdom of Gaspar and into the dark and treacherous caves of the Goblin Realm. What Kay doesn’t realize is that his journey is leading him on a collision course with the Lord of Nyn – a being so powerful that none dare face him...not even Alamin himself!

My Review:
As I said before, The Road to Nyn is a charming quest adventure with a sense along the lines of Lord of the Rings with just a smidge of the movie A Knight's Tale thrown in for good measure.

We open with young Kay competing in the midst of the Squire Trials as he attempts to become the first page in living memory to become a squire - at least the first commoner to accomplish such a feat.  Squires typically come from the privileged class because it is they who move up the ranks to knighthood.  Such an opportunity most only dream of, but Kay lives it and relishes how consideration of a title will elevate his family.

But Kay holds a secret that, if revealed, could destroy everything he holds dear.  Magic has been outlawed in the Kingdom of Gaspar, and while Kay has been openly competing for a position as a squire, he's also been learning the ways of Alamin, the wizard.  He must give up such association if he is to realize his dream of becoming a knight.

Before he decides, Kay's village is attacked and his family enslaved by goblins.  Thus begins the journey to locate his family before they are taken into the bowels of the Goblin Realm, where no man has made it out alive.  Along with Alamin, his trusty dog, Strapper, and a host of new friends along the way, Kay must cross the Bridge of Bones into the land of Nyn and rescue his family before it is too late.

This really is a cute coming-of-age story and is written in line with older grade schoolers to middle schoolers in mind.  There's nothing objectionable, though some younger children might find the Bridge of Bones and the Goblin Realm a bit scary.  Felix, the woodland sprite, is the needed dose of humor to keep the story from becoming too heavy.

My favorite parts centered around where Alamin tricks the witch when leaving the swamps (that's all I'll say) and near the end when...hmmm, can't really say this because then it would give the story away.  

Editing was clean, with only a few jumps in point-of-view within a scene.  The story unfolded in real time, which kept telling to a minimum.  The length felt just right, with enough closure at the end for this to be a complete book, though a few loose ends will likely lead into Kay's next adventure - which I wouldn't mind continuing.

Yes, you'll see comparisons to Lord of the Rings, but this will offer the young ones someone to relate to, something they can sink their teeth into as they work their way up the literary food chain.  There's nothing objectionable here.  For those of us who aren't so young anymore, let go of comparisons and enjoy something refreshing to instill that spirit of adventure we all possessed when we were kids.

For entertainment value and fairly clean copy, The Lord of Nyn is worth a good four and a-half stars in my book.

Pick up a copy by clicking on Amazon.

Author Bio:
Brian G. Michaud is the author of the young adult fantasy The Road to Nyn, the first book in The Tales of
Gaspar series. Although a musician and music teacher by day, reading and writing have been Brian’s passion since childhood.

The story behind the writing of The Road to Nyn goes back to a cold February night in 1992 in the Berklee College of Music dorms. Having run out of books to read, Brian sat down and decided to write what he thought would be a short story based around a young squire that he named after King Arthur’s brother, Kay. The tale came to him as if out of nowhere, and he found that he had written twelve pages at the end of the first night.

Looking over what he wrote, Brian was surprised to see that what he had in his hands was not a short story but something that resembled the first chapter of a book. Eager to find out what happened next, Brian began to make writing his nightly ritual. Within months, the story grew to over 200 pages, written in various notebooks.

Though he never forgot about his story, he had to put it aside for other obligations. He began commuting to school to help care for an aging grandparent, and then he began student teaching which was followed by his first teaching job. Later came a Master’s degree from the University of Connecticut and then a Doctorate from Boston University. Still, the unfinished story was not forgotten. After many years of picking the manuscript up and being forced to put it down, Brian finally published The Road to Nyn in November 2013.

Growing up as an ardent fan of the classics, fantasy, and mysteries, Brian had been rarely found without a book in his hand. Now, he is rarely found without a notebook or computer nearby to put down his latest ideas. The sequel to The Road to Nyn, with the working title of The Ring of Carnac, is more than half complete. Brian expects a projected release of November 2014.


Thursday, July 17, 2014

Diamonds All the Rage in "The Hard Way"

Do you wanna ski the slopes in Las Vegas?  How about strap on a pair of ice skates and slide across the outdoor rink?  You could do all that and more at January Resort and Casino, the luxurious locale in Cathi Stoler's novel The Hard Way.

The Hard Way Summary:
Private Investigator Helen McCorkendale’s childhood friend, Jimmy Scanlan, has just opened January, the most lavish casino and hotel resort on the Las Vegas Strip. After attending the grand opening, Helen returns to New York and encourages her friend, Laurel Imperiole, Senior Editor at Women Now magazine, to create a get-away contest for readers offering a weekend at the hotel as the grand prize. The winner, Dawn Chapman, a jewelry store employee from Cincinnati, denies entering the contest and initially refuses the trip. Finally persuaded by Laurel to accept, she arrives at the hotel and nearly faints when she passes the hotel’s elite meeting rooms where the International Diamond Dealers Consortium is holding its annual meeting. She insists on returning home immediately.

Suspicious of her behavior, Jimmy visits her suite to encourage her to attend the Saturday afternoon pool party, saying she can leave on his private jet the next day. Later in the afternoon, he finds Chapman’s dead body by the pool. She’s been murdered—an unusual double poisoning by cyanide and diamond dust.

Dawn Chapman was not who she appeared to be, and therein lies a mystery. But to Helen and Laurel, the main task is to take Jimmy Scanlon off the suspect list and clear his name. Will their luck hold? Or will it be a crap shoot, as they roll the dice and do it ‘the hard way,’ going for doubles when the odds are against them. Losing may mean losing their lives.

My Review:
We open with a lavish affair as Jimmy Scanlan, New York PI Helen McCorkendale's childhood friend, whisks her away to Las Vegas for the grand opening gala of his flagship January Resort and Casino.  Rub shoulders with the likes of music moguls, politicians, famous actors, and Keith Richards as they take in the incredible array of an indoor ski resort, an outdoor ice rink, the Igloo restaurant, and the Blue Ice Nightclub - January's soon-to-be-famous watering hole made entirely of ice.  Accommodations are fabulous.  The food to die for.  Success is certainly on the horizon.

Until death threatens Jimmy's precarious empire.

Laurel Imperiole, editor of New York's premier magazine Women Now, thought she had a great idea to help Helen's friend get his new casino off to a great start - a spread featuring the winner enjoying a free weekend trip to January.

But no one expected the contestant to be murdered - and right in the middle of the International Diamond Dealers Consortium.

All the while Jimmy's arch enemy, Clive Drummond, hopes he'll get first dibs at the dying carcass that was once January.  After all, he had big plans for that location until Jimmy swept it out from under him.

The Hard Way is the third book in a series, but it's pretty much a standalone as far as the mystery, with only a little bit of some of the side stories from events in the first two coming into play.  The first novel in the series was pretty much focused on Laurel with Helen's character more of an afterthought.  The second had more equal parts with Laurel and Helen, but Laurel was still the driving force leading the story.  This third novel was focused primarily on Helen, which felt a little more accurate since she's supposed to be the private investigator here.  Helen is also a bit more refined and likeable than Laurel, which is why I somewhat liked this one a bit more than the first and second.

The story here is pretty simple.  There's not really a whole lot of tension.  It's easy to figure out where everything is headed and who the bad guys are, so it's relaxed reading for those who like a cozy mystery that doesn't require much thought.  I typically like something with a bit more grit.  But then again, I'm a little weird for a girl.

My biggest issue with The Hard Way is that it is written in very passive voice.  It consists mostly of telling instead of showing, which frustrated me.  Most scenes started out with a character rehashing what previously happened while the reader apparently had their eyes closed or took a nap.  Such as one character was getting ready to head into a dangerous situation at the end of one chapter, and then the next chapter opened with that character waking up the next morning and reviewing the events of the previous evening either in their mind or over coffee with someone else.  This happened over and over throughout the story.  Why did I as the reader not get to experience said events as they were happening instead of merely having a character tell me about it later?  This deflated any semblance of tension or character empathy throughout the entire novel, leaving me feeling like a good storyline idea never lived up to its potential.

Even after reading the first two books I felt no connection to the characters.  The decisions they made to lie to those around them and to hide evidence from the police (and then wonder why the police weren't able to do their job) really kept them in the doghouse for me - and yet, neither Helen nor Laurel pay any sort of price for their constant deceptions.  The main storyline is quickly wrapped up with little to no resolution of many other outstanding questions.  I closed out The Hard Way feeling rather dissatisfied.

However, point-of-view usage was spot on.  Change in character POV was properly delineated with a scene or chapter break - very refreshing to an anal nut like me.  Descriptions of the casino were vivid and I could easily imagine what it would look like in real life.  Editing was fairly clean with only a few noticeable moments (IDCC instead of IDDC a couple of times - very understandable considering the close proximity on the keyboard) and formatting was just as clean.  I appreciated that, and wished very much that the story would have flowed better with more showing instead of so much telling.

But again, if something simple is your fancy and an escape from reality tickles your brain, you might enjoy the vast descriptions of January Resort and Casino enough to take a gander.  Now that's a place I'd like to check out some day - if only it existed in the real world.  Sigh!

Prices/Formats: $4.95 ebook, $14.95 paperback
Pages:
280
Release:
April 15, 2014
Publisher:
Camel Press
ISBN:
9781603819497

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Author Bio:
Cathi Stoler’s mysteries feature PI Helen McCorkendale and magazine editor, Laurel Imperiole. The Hard
Way is the third book in the series. The first, Telling Lies, took on the subject of stolen Nazi art. Book 2, Keeping Secrets, delved into the subject of hidden identity. Stoler’s short stories include: “Magda,” in the Criminal Element Anthology Malfeasance Occasional: Girl Trouble, “Out of Luck,” in the Anthology, Murder New York Style: Fresh Slices, “Fatal Flaw,” a finalist for the Derringer for Best Short Story and “Money Never Sleeps” both published at Beat to A Pulp. Cathi is working on a novella, Nick of Time, which features International gambler, Nick Donahue. She is also starting a new series, Bar None, A Murder On The Rocks Mystery, with female bar owner, Jude Dillane. Cathi is a member of the New York/Tri State chapter of Sisters In Crime. She is also a member of Mystery Writers of America.

Connect with Cathi at http://cathistoler.com/

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